There is no specific formula for children's fiction. There are,
however, some necessities. Whether you are writing a humorous
picture book or a coming-of-age novel for young adults, you will
need: a main character, a setting, a problem or goal and a
satisfying ending.
*Main character
Develop protagonists that your readers will care about. Create
characters that are the same age or a little older than your
target audience. Make them real and believable. Allow your
characters to make mistakes and have embarrassing moments.
Children aren't perfect. They can't identify with a protagonist
who is. Give Molly Squinch an obsession with worms or the
inability to complete anything. Make Henry Steed stumble
and turn red when a certain teacher comes near. Develop a
character who is real enough to be living next door.
*Setting
Your setting has to be clear, but incidental. This is where
show, don't tell comes into play. Weave an awareness of
the setting through action and dialogue. Don't allow description
to put the brakes on your pace. Children's eyes tend to glaze
over when faced with blocks of description. You may have written
an award-winning paragraph about a mountain backdrop – save it.
Most ten-year-olds will not be interested. Use it for your next
adult novel.
*Problem or goal
This is your plot. Give your character a problem, or a wish.
Push him gently toward the solution to his problem or the
fulfillment of his goal. Then toss in an obstacle. He must
overcome it using his own ingenuity and/or skill. When he's
succeeded, throw him another one and then maybe a third. You can
make things really interesting by making each hurdle a little
higher than the last. The most important thing here is to allow
the protagonist to conquer his own problems or achieve his own
goals. Try not to depend on coincidences and avoid allowing an
adult or older brother to swoop in and save the day.
*Satisfying ending
One aspect of a satisfying ending calls for a change in your
main character. He must learn something, accept something or
experience emotional growth. Your ending doesn't always have to
be 'happily ever after' but it must be tight. The loose ends
must be tied up and all characters accounted for and placed in
reasonable situations. It is best to avoid lingering questions
at the end of a children's book.
You don't want to hear: "So what happened to the guy with the
yellow belt?" or "But that kid was in Africa, so how did he get
there?"
You do want to hear: "Aaaaaaah. I get it."
Pick up any children's storybook or middle-grade novel in your
library or bookstore. You will find that most of them contain
the four basic ingredients. From a picturebook about a child's
fear of the basement to a fifteen-year-old's struggle with
drinking, the essentials will be included. Exercise your
imagination. Create a character you care about and give him a
problem. Use a fascinating setting as a backdrop and allow your
character to use his own ingenuity and skills to achieve his
goal or get out of his predicament. With these essentials in
mind, your children's story can become a success.
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