Writing emails seems so easy and quick, anyone can do it
without giving it a second thought. But by rushing it
carelessly, are you wasting a useful opportunity to promote
yourself and your business? Professional business writer Suzan
St Maur shares her top tips on how to make your emails much more
powerful...
1. Make the effort to learn about the etiquette (these days
known as "netiquette") involved in writing emails. There are
loads of good reference websites and books about the internet
which will tell you the basics. I know it might seem a bit
precious to attach so much importance to social niceties when
the internet is basically very informal. However, whether we
like it or not many people do take online etiquette very
seriously. So if you're writing emails for business, you should
assume that your recipient may well be one of those...
2. Never send and preferably don't even try to write an email if
you're angry, upset, drunk, or otherwise not in total control.
If you have a heated conversation with someone on the telephone
you can sometimes fudge things over. But with emails, once you
hit "send" whatever you've written is there, carved in tablets
of stone, for as long as the recipient wants to glare at it. The
old adage about "counting to ten" before responding couldn't be
more true here. Only send angry emails if you can handle, or
really don't care about, the recipient's resultant feelings!
3. One thing that you may not think of is that it can be useful
to consider carefully the time you send your emails. To begin
with it's always a good idea to avoid sending emails that
coincide with the Monday morning rush and Friday afternoon
lethargy. In addition, I've occasionally found that emails sent
to companies over the weekend end up getting lost in cyberspace.
And on a rather more subtle level, if your recipients see that
you're sending emails on a Sunday morning or late at night, they
may feel they can interrupt you for a business talk at the same
times. Although you may think it's cool to impress a client that
you work all hours, your partner won't when the same client
calls you on the phone at midnight.
4. Because almost everyone at some time or another has been
infected with a computer virus, people are understandably wary
of attachments. I never send attachments to anyone I don't know
very well, and equally never open attachments unless they're
from people I know well. And then, some contemporary viruses and
worms clone themselves on to genuine email names and addresses,
so even an email purporting to be from someone you know might
just be infected. When in doubt append text to the body of your
email message, or contact the recipient beforehand and make sure
they're happy to receive it as an attachment.
5. Layout of emails is something few people pay attention to,
especially if (like me) their system uses text only. However
even with simple text a sensible layout can make the whole thing
more readable. Above all, you should avoid writing emails that
sprawl all the way across the screen. Those are very hard to
read and to be able to see everything properly as text, your
reader may have to fiddle about changing fonts. The safest
format to use consists of lines no more than 65 characters long.
That fits, works everywhere and makes the email much easier on
the eye.
6. Your subject line should focus on what's in it for the reader
so it grabs their attention. You'll find that the best way to do
that is to include some sort of benefit. For example, if you're
writing an email about a downwardly-revised project budget,
instead of saying "Project X - revised costs" say "Project X -
costs reduced by XX%"). If there isn't a genuine benefit to use,
try to make it interesting and intriguing anyway. Also, avoid
the words most hated by spam filters like "free," "subscribe,"
etc. 7. Online writing has to be kept concise and clear, largely
because the screen is a particularly unfriendly reading medium
for most people's eyes. If only for that reason the KISS
principle (Keep It Short & Simple) is useful. With emails you
need to get straight to the point and keep to it. Someone who
receives dozens of emails per day doesn't have time to wade
through a lot of preamble. By making your point concisely you'll
stand the greatest possible chance of avoiding the undignified
fate of being deleted.
8. As far as writing style is concerned, here more than with any
other medium it's very, very helpful to write as people speak.
In addition, it will make your email clearer and more concise if
you leave out all but essential adjectives and adverbs. Keep
your sentences short, and only ever include one main idea or
thought per sentence. Paragraphs shouldn't consist of more than
6 sentences max - fewer if possible. And if you list more than a
couple of items, use bullet points.
9. If you write emails for business, make good use of the
signature facility that goes after your name. It's surprising
just how many people fail to use that facility properly - yet
it's an excellent opportunity for you to put across a few words
of promotion. Because the email signature appears at the end,
your recipients are not likely to be irritated by it. In fact
provided that it contains useful contact information it will be
seen as a helpful addition to your message. And even if your
email is text only you can still make it look reasonably smart.
About Author :
Canadian-born Suzan St Maur is an international business writer
and author based in the United Kingdom. Read more - and check
out her free biweekly business writing tips eZine, Tipz
from Suze, - at her website, SuzanStMaur.com ©
Suzan St Maur 2003-2005